In the middle of conversation you spit out your chewing gum
Onto the street, like its instinct. doesn’t ebb the flow of words. I stutter
words of distaste, taken aback. It’s the first time I’ve seen
you do something like that. It feels like it’s outside your behaviour rules.
Your expression changes.
Much like the day back when I complimented you a little too much
When your team won at the regional rugby match.
That I didn’t know you played.
Stutter.
Don’t know.
me, who you are or you, who I am?
You flicker, furrow on your forehead, forget what faults
we have
Better early than late.
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I love the structure of this poem and the rhythm and imagery. Great work!
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Thank you, your words are very encouraging 🙂
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I agree with Sanch. The lines, the words, the way you write , they are all engaging and thought provoking. Great job!
P.S.
Thank you for following me! see you around!
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Of course, your blog is worth following, that’s why 🙂
And thanks again for your comment – it means a lot. (Personally, I thought the wording was unnatural, so thanks!)
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oh. i think unnatural is good. 🙂
Thank you and you are welcome. 🙂
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